writing a conclusion

November 6, 2009 at 5:11 pm (Uncategorized) (, , )

So I have written my whole paper and I am pretty proud of my work. However, the conclusion seems weak to me. I feel like my conclusion is just my first paragraph again. Does anyone have any suggestion to make a stronger ending?

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  1. mynawhitney1 said,

    Well in the book some where, I think it’s chapter 6 or 7, they tell you how to consturt a introductory paragraph. They tell you how to construct a conclusion as well as an introductory paragraph because they are in a sense the same thing. Only only difference is that one opens and the other closes. They both give you a summary of all the keys points in your paper just in different ways. This is probably why you think you conclusion sounds like your introductory. This is good though. The problem is that it’s weak. I decided to end my paper with a hard hit of I’m right thier wrong and here’s why you should listen. Maybe you could do that. And Prof said that you can always end with a rhetorical question as a last resort.

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